十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍,目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。
需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定句,从很多考生的高分来分析,句子数量在句至1句。如以每个句子平均—1个单词计算,便能用—1个句子完成一篇要求120—150字的作文。
其基本模式为:
┌─主题句句1第一段─┤开头└─扩展句句2┌─主题句句1第一段─┤正文├─扩展句句2├─扩展句句3├─扩展句句4├─扩展句句5├─扩展句句6├─扩展句句7├─扩展句句8└─扩展句句9第三段──结尾句句10结尾
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,必须提出,通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理,结构得当。第三段为结尾,简化为一句,也是全文的总结句,它将前面内容总结为一结果,表明自己的论点。
三段之间的连接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的连接过渡手段。
例如:Example1
TelevisionTelevisionpresentsavividworldinfrontofus.ThroughTV,wecanlearnwhatishappeninghalfwayacrosstheworld.Televisionalsoplaysanimportanteducationalroleinourdailylife.Foronething,theTVuniversityprovidesanopportunityformanyyoungmenwhocannotgotoformaluniversities.Foranother,childrencanbroadentheirscopeofknowledgebywatchingsuchpopularprogramsasTheAnimalWorld,andTheMickeyMouseandDuckDonald.Besides,womencanlearnaboutthelatestfashionofdressesandthebestrecipeformakingfruitcakes.Furthermore,welearnmanyworldadvancedtechnologiesfromTVprogramssuchascomputerandtelecommunication.Andalsowecanlearnsinging,dancinganddoingphysicalexercisesinsomespecialTVtrainingcourses.Inshort,theeffectofTVseducationalroleisbecomingmoreandmoreobvious.Havingviewedtheseseveralaspects,andwithmanymoreTVprogramproduced,Ibelievethatourlifewillbecomeevenmoresignificant.
Example2
ChangesinPeoplesDietTherehavebeensomechangesnowadaysinthedietoftheChinese.Forexample,grain,themainfoodofmostpeopleinChina,isnowplayingalessimportantrole,whiletheconsumptionofhigh-nutritionfoodsuchasmilk,meathasincreased.Thechangesindietcanbeaccountedforbyanumberoffactors.First,peoplearemuchwealthierthanbefore.Withahigherincome,theycanaffordtobuygoodfoodswhich,inthepast,wererarelyseenonthedinnertablesofordinaryfamilies.Anotherfactoristhatpeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceofabalanceddiettotheirhealth.Lackofcertainamountofmeatormilk,forexample,willresultinpoorhealth.Finally,owingtotheeconomicreform,meatandmilk,whichwerescarceinthepast,areproducedinlargequantities.Forallthosereasons,whatwasformerlycalledthebasketofvegetableshasbecomethatofvariedfoods.Tosumup,insignificantasthosechangesmayseem,theyarethesignsoftheimprovedeconomicconditioninChina,andwebelievethatastheeffortinthemodernizationmovementcontinues,therewillbegreaterchangesinpeoplesdietinthefuture.
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